The Music Inspector

The worst singing lesson ever! 

Hi I am Jesse, today when I got to school I realized it was singing inspector day! I love to sing but when it comes to Mr.R  I  absolutely hate it. Mr.R is a pink faced, curly haired, scarey, deep blue eyed, meany, wearing Knickerbockers (like a hunting man). 

So he had the whole school sing except for the little ones and Jack Long and Paulus who do exams and no singing (lucky). So when he called me I... Was... PETRIFIED! But I had to sing so I clung to my dress really tightly. Then I sang and I was ok (luckily).  

I felt so bad for the others like Iris and Gladys who Mr.R  called the def and the dumb! I hope one day he can get a diary and write all those rude things in there and not say it to our faces because it is absolutely and utterly unnecessary! 

So he sent Iris,Gladys,Charles and Benny. The reason for Charles and Benny to be sent out is that they were so scared and then sang Pretty Polly (because that was all they could sing, shame!) terribly but if he was nicer they would have sang nicer!   

          I hate dislike Mr.R  very much!

Comments

  1. Anonymous24 May 2019 at 23:57

    I love your description of Mr R , Shannon! You express yourself clearly and have organised your narrative into paragraphs properly. You seem to rush your story, however, and skim over your feelings and emotions without much detail. Your last paragraph could probably do with a bit more thought and an edit. Avoid colloquial ways of expressing yourself, such as beginning sentences with 'so' !

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